media evaluation question 3

From my audience feedback i have learned that the main flaw/problem with my music video is the lack of a clear narrative, this made it confusing for the audience to understand what as happening in the music video and who the main character was, if i was to re-do my music video i would make more of an effort to include a clear narrative that would make the music video more enjoyable for the audience.
However as you can see from the video, the audience did still enjoy my music video.